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Here I am sitting here again
My eyes setting on the square
Banning all distractions
To pursue your footsteps through that space
To substitute those that were lost in a stance
Very often you would leap and bounce
Shout fierce and loud
Silently, I witnessed all these
Every move you make, every shout you screech
Takes me a step closer to you
There can’t be any closer than this
No, since the day you leave
Let me propel this to eternity
Even it’s gonna drive me to insanity
For memories still linger
Feelings did not change
Product of these two - pain
They suck you in like a black hole
Within darkness I remain
I do not wish death
Though it may be better that way
I’d rather plead for immortality
So I could be the black angel
Watching you day by day
Do not disappear from this link
If you do… I shall vanish with you
Into the abyss of darkness
Forever to eternity….
My eyes setting on the square
Banning all distractions
To pursue your footsteps through that space
To substitute those that were lost in a stance
Very often you would leap and bounce
Shout fierce and loud
Silently, I witnessed all these
Every move you make, every shout you screech
Takes me a step closer to you
There can’t be any closer than this
No, since the day you leave
Let me propel this to eternity
Even it’s gonna drive me to insanity
For memories still linger
Feelings did not change
Product of these two - pain
They suck you in like a black hole
Within darkness I remain
I do not wish death
Though it may be better that way
I’d rather plead for immortality
So I could be the black angel
Watching you day by day
Do not disappear from this link
If you do… I shall vanish with you
Into the abyss of darkness
Forever to eternity….
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My first deviation, 2nd attempt to poetry/prose. I completed it in a hour or so - in desperation to let go of something within. Does not tell everything though, due to lack of skills (hope I will be better next time). Nevertheless, it helps alittle in letting go. 
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It's a very good poem, should you ask me... This is the bitter and cold truth. The darkness and the pain left in us when people leave and choose not to be near you... Man... I loved this...